Changed Script for Thriller

Phil and I, decided that the dialogue for Alison who is playing the President's Personal Assitant doesn't sound urgent enough and very cliche. Between us we spent about an hour and a half coming up with new lines for Alison to see if it could make the Thriller more belieavle than it already is. Some of the lines that we came up with are:

• "We're doing all we can sir!"
• "This is a new type of threat./We’ve never seen an attack on this scale./But the entire network has been infiltrated."
• "How the hell could they have done this?"
• "Britain and France are in the loop Germany are being briefed as we speak."
• "We don’t know what we’re dealing with here, Sir."
• "Every agency is working on this."
• "We're goona need your full cooperation to deal with this threat!"
  
  

The line that I end up choosing as the final one, will be the one that I voice record onto my animatic.